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This picture was taken indoors. What I notice first is 5 people sitting. In the foremost of the picture, I can see a man, who has dark-brown curly hair and is wearing glasses. He is wearing a black T-shirt and is using his laptop. The other four people are also doing something such as reading books or using their laptop. There is also a black seat. On the background of the picture I can see a brown-wooden wall. The overall atmosphere of this picture looks very serious. I believe that this place look like a typical library.

 

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i) I use the convenience store 3 times a day. In the morning, in the afternoon and in the evening. This is because there is a convenience store right in front my home and in front of the company I work.

 

ii) I would definitely choose healthy products to cheap products. This is because I recently take care a lot about my skin(^^). Therefore I rather choose healthier products to cheaper products.

 

iii) I definitely believe that convenience stores need to sell fresh products rather than just concentrate on the price. There are several reasons why I believe this way. Recently we are living in a very competitive society and therefore the price in every convenience store is low. Therefore the only way to gain a competitive advantage against other convenience stores is to provide fresher products. For this reason I believe that convenience stores need to concentrate on fresh products.

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i) The event will be held on November, 13th(³¯Â¥ ºÒÈ®½Ç) and will be held at the Hilton hotel(Àå¼Ò ºÒÈ®½Ç).

 

ii) ³Ê¹« »ó¼¼ÇÑ ³»¿ëÀ̶ó ±â¾ïÀÌ ³ªÁö ¾Ê½À´Ï´Ù.

 

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Hi Sally, this is Say(Àú ½ÇÁ¦·Î Á¦°¡ Say¶ó°í ÇßÀ½¤»¤»¤») your assistant returning your call. How are you? I received your message that you want to raise funds in order to enhance the materials for our children. Hmmm, this is a very important issue, so you must be very worried. However, since I have a lot of experience in this field I believe that I can help you out. What I recommend you to do is to do an online and offline promotion. We can advertise our goal to enhance the materials for our children and if the parents get exposed to our promotion I definitely believe that they are going to donate money for the children. I will treat this issue with great care so please don\'t worry. If you have any further questions about the promotion please feel free to ask me whenever you want. Good bye.

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I definitely believe that there are a lot of disadvantages of always buying the state-of-the-art electronic products. There are several reasons why I believe this way.

First of all, the latest electronic devices are expensive.

In fact, the latest electronic devices are normally more expensive than older products.

For example, when I needed to buy a new cell phone, I had to pay 800 dollars for the new I-phone from apple(Àú »ï¼º Æù ¾¸. ´Ü Çѹø ¾ÆÀÌÆù ½áº¸Áö ¾Ê¾Ò½À´Ï´Ù. µå¸³À» ¸· ³¯¸³½Ã´Ù.).

Therefore, buying new electronic devices can be a huge financial burden.

Also, it is a waste of time.

To be specific, you need to spend a lot of time in order to figure out what kind of electronic devices were recently released.

As a matter of fact, you need to check magazines and search in the Internet to figure out about the latest electronic devices.

Since it is very expensive and since it takes a lot of time, I believe that there are more disadvantages of changing electronic devices often.

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